I write poems, some happy, some sad
Most sound like Iām going mad,
Perhaps one day I will realise my talents.
Perhaps one day I will find my balance.
I rhyme about dreams & hope they will stay
But dreams have a habit of fading away,
I write them down even if they are shattered.
So I’ll remember when they actually mattered.
Poetry is a hobby and my therapy choice.
To express my feelings and raise my voice,
I am singing now my rhyming hymns.
In those moments when life turns grim.
K
What a lovely poem, it rolls off the tongue.
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Thank you xx
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nice flow, i love the way you create. it is so natural.
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Aww thank you, your words are greatly appreciated x
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I really love this….and I feel you.
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Aww thank you x
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There is a variety in your poetry I don’t hear in other voices on wordpress. They have a formula and stick to it. Many poets say the same thing over and over. You have a rhyming formula, but your voice that I hear has varied themes and thus inspire complex reactions. I like that.
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Wow Thankyou, I do try with variety and depends on my mindset when I am writing, but thank you you have made my day with that comment x
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Walter Rich puts it much better than me … you are a poet, a good one, unpredictable and thought inducing, always stimulating to read and above all for me don’t go on too long either!
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Haha, I know what you mean, I prefer them short and sweet, and thank you my dear, always a pleasure to hear your words x
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It reads like a ballad, that’s what I say,
It’s the best poem I’ve read this bright sunny day.
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haha love it! thank you
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Lovely!
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Thank you x
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I hadn’t come across the darkest fairytale before today, from what I’ve seen so far this is a very gifted writer indeed … exceptionally talented. Apart from anything else, l can’t get my head round the fact that the poems rhyme, yet still manage to express such raw emotion.
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well thank you Eleanor that is very kind of you, i do like my rhymes, thanks for reading lovely x
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Keep writing.. š I loved this poem..
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thank you xx
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Your welcome… ā¤
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Simply brilliant ! x
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thank you sweetness x
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Beautiful and loving
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thank you xx
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These are also my feelings about writing a poetry, but your poem is more beautiful than what I can say about myself in my mind. I like it so much.
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aww thank you x
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Hahaha……Loved it ! You are a rythmic wizard, cheers š
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thank you x
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Simply Superb
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thank you my dear x
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Pleasure š
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Don’t stop. Love it.
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Thank you xx
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Wow I jus read a few pieces of your work and it’s legit amazing š do u do english creative writing at uni or what šÆ
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Haha no,I just write that the mind thinks x
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Something in common then š
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Oh and my blogs address that appears next to my name “jeeonews” that’s not mine lol. You already follow mine it’s called Harjitsinghsblog.WordPress.Com
Jus saying cuz someone got into this illusion before š
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Ok thank you for letting me know xx
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