Secret location

Laid at the top of the green hand in hand
Staring into the distance at the far away land,
A crisp breeze blowing through my hair
Soaking the sun whilst cherishing the air.

My secret location to think & remember
A place I used to visit every December,
Admiring the nature & the clouds in the sky
So secluded no one could hear me cry.

Whatever the worry I’ll have that spot
Where time is precious & time stops,
A place to go to my own secret pleasure
Full of balance which is my treasure.


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20 Responses to Secret location

  1. Great Poem. I thought it was cool.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Nan Mykel says:

    Very good. I do wonder if the 2 ””weres” are “wheres.” Loads of folks like it as it is, so maybe I’m wrong.


  3. nicely done, nicely done


  4. fairykumar says:

    You are just awesome on your poetic personality!

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Eleanor says:

    Lovely poem, immediate, easy to relate to. x

    Liked by 1 person

  6. avinamdar says:

    Very nice poem, love the flow ! Cheers 🙂


  7. extinct0703 says:

    Shall I follow your blog? if assured to be treated with such wonderful poems ahead too

    Liked by 1 person

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