Fearing storms,
That don’t go away,
Turning the bluest skies
Into the darkest grey.
Oxygen has been poisoned
From toxic lies,
Blizzards are covering
Those clouded eyes.
Fires are burning
From the heat of rage,
Melting the walls
Around the cage.
Lightning strikes
From the thunder,
Destroying the bridges
We are hiding under.
Oceans are rising
Filling the eyes,
Tsunamis are made
From the tears cried.
Shards of ice
Fly from the heart,
Earthquakes ripping
Innocence apart.
K
I absolutely love this, great place, rhyme and flow, such a great read.
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Thank you xx
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you’re so very welcome 🙂
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I know what this feels like…
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What Blossom and Simon say – I agree totally
Felt like you pulled this from MY heart – Sending warmth and Love to melt your shards x
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Aww thank you sweetness xx
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Great poem ! Loved the use of metaphors to convey the emotions, well written indeed 🙂
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Thank you very much xx
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😊💕
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It’s so true!
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Well done. Lighting should read Lightning.
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Ahh thanks for the spot, IL get it changed xx
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Amazing as always 🙂
It’s splendid ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you lovely xx
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This was fabulous!
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Thank you xx
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Amazing master piece, i love the flow. You are great
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Thank you, your words are always appreciated xx
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Your really welcome. The pleasure is all mine
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Why are you writing about my love life? Ahaha. Seriously this is wonderful, the images you create are stunning. Well done you, great poem!!!
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Thank you, haha more directed at my love life, but if you can related that is a bonus and thank you, x
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I’m not sure who wins in a contest of tortured love lives but I certainly enjoyed the poem. If you’re interested I met someone who has a weather machine for sale, I was thinking of fixing it up to battle the storms, wanna help? Ahaha!!!
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Haha well what a line that is, and yes I will be happy enough with the machine or a remote island whichevers easy x
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Yeah…I don’t really do normal well, lines are way more fun that way. You’ll have to tell me if it worked so I know of its a keeper. Ahahaha!! Oh now a remote island sounds delightful, to laze under the sun without a care in the world *longing sigh*
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Haha OK IL let you know if it works, if so I’ll send it your way x
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This is so beautiful. I love how you managed to convey so many emotions just by the choice of right words. Lovely.
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Thank you, it’s much appreciated x
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