My satellite

He came out of nowhere
Like a gust of wind,
Blowing me over
Until my body was pinned.
The ocean in his eyes
Called me to the shore,
Drowning me in his iris
Into the depth of his core.
The electricity between us
Created a surge of power
Flashing through the sky
He is my meteor shower.
Like the Moon orbiting earth
In the beauty of the night,
He’s spinning around me
As my own satellite.


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29 Responses to My satellite

  1. Simon says:

    That’s a powerful and passionate piece. I liked it โ˜บ

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  2. I loved reading this poem. You’re very creative and talented ๐Ÿค—

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  3. Greg Nikolic says:

    HE orbits YOU?

    What kind of a chick wants THAT?

    You should be orbiting HIM.

    You’ve obviously never met me.

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  4. MultidimensionalHE says:

    Do you admire his orbiting?

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  5. mandibelle16 says:

    Love the line “he is my meteor shower.” Wonderful post!

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  6. Rajiv says:

    Well, well!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Eleanor says:

    Lovely poem. Puts pictures into my head. xx

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  8. Bernadette says:

    Wow, that was fantastic.

    Liked by 1 person

  9. EDC Writing says:

    Good one K from an odd piece of granite!

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  10. novelistbaba says:

    in some fashion,
    of heavenly conspiracy,
    our entangled universes:
    now orbit around
    in desires earthly,
    for forever.

    you write skillfully……..great imagery………..sweet and beautiful…….absolutely loved it!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

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