I want your insides
To come alive
In a beautiful way,
I’ll unwrap the naughty surprises
That you’re hiding away.
Release that ungodly beast
That you restrain,
I’ve never been a fan
Of people wearing chains.
You’re a vision in the night
When the light shines through
The only time I’ve felt religion,
Is when I’ve slept with you.
Like an untamed wildfire
Uncontrollable and free,
It’s an earth shattering passion
That’s building memories.
So I want you unchained
Come as you are,
Naked and bare
Show me every scar.
Break down your walls
Show me what’s within,
The real beauty
Is what’s beneath the skin.
K
Awesome write! This is one of my favorites. Grabbed me with the opening two lines. Then: The only time I’ve felt religion/ Is when I’ve slept with you. Gorgeous. I’ve hidden my collected poems on my blog. Just come by for a visit and click “More Writing.” Grab a cup of tea or a bourbon, your choice, and get a good read on. Cheers!
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Thank you lovely! Ahh I’ve just been on your page having a look around, I was looking for the poem section, ilk go back on, thank you x
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Thank you!
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That’s really passionate…
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Thank you! I felt like passion was on the notepad tonight 🙂
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Just in the notepad eh? Lol
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Haha unfortunately 🙂 it’s was I’m the air! X
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Ours funny how out gets in the air! Lol
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Tell me about it! It’s contagious!
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Is it? You must be getting passion come your way then… It’s not coming mine lol
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Haha I’ll blow you some , make sure you catch it and put it some where safe xx
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Thanks hun… I thought the idea was to give it to someone? 😉
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Hopefully my words will pass it on to you, so you can pass it on x
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Very nice, I enjoyed reading this.
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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it x
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Reblogged this on Orthometry.
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Aww Thankyou for sharing as always x
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You are welcome! I wonder if this could be made into a new “Go-Go’s” song. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r3kQlzOi27M&list=PL2D7052FBB9F1AC7F
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K, one of your best! Absolutely love it!
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Thank you beautiful!
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This is the best I’ve read from you, and I’ve been following closely. I really think you’ve crossed a threshold. Congratulations!
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Thank you that is very much appreciated xx
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I find your writing tragically beautiful, but I have only touched upon a small fraction of what you have, but I want to see the rest.
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Aww thank you, I’m much appreciated on how much you read 🙂 xx
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I started and got hooked very quickly, an addictive flow through all 👍
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Aww well that’s good to hear! I’m glad my work has that affect on you x
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Love the flow
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Thank you xx
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Always a pleasure
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Lovely poem, Keep it up. Keep writing 🙂
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Thank you, I will 🙂
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beautiful lines… hope to read more of your work..
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Aww thank you it’s much much appreciated xx
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Beautiful 💕
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Thank you 🙂
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The Beast within
Where passion, pain
Begin forays
You could be a delectable muse.
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Thank you, that’s the first time I’ve heard that and it’s much appreciated lovely x
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True, you have beautifully expressed beauty’s irony. You could comment on similar two poems that I have recently written: ‘Is beauty truth’ and ‘Am I immune to beauty’.
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Haha thank you that comment is beautiful itself x
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Beautiful… 🙂
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Thank you xx
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You’re welcome!!
It’s always a pleasure reading your works!!😍
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