I asked the skies
To give me a sign,
The lightning struck
A silver line.
I crossed the line
To a paradise,
Filled with chaos
Hurricanes,
And shards of ice.
In all this ice
Was your name,
The skies showed me
Beauty can be found
In the chaos,
Of pain.
K
The Darkest Fairytale 
Amazing, as usual!
xoxo
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Thank you x
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I really like this one…cool imagery.
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Aww thank you x
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(I just left like responding in this form, maybe I am wrong, maybe I am right (kinda hoping I am wrong though) I do, however, hope you like it.)
I saw you today
talking into the wind
looking for an answer
trying to find
that which shook
that rumbled
that touched your core
I saw you today
trying hard
to hide from your solitude
to not feel the cold
nor bitterness
to accept the pain
and asking for more.
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I really do like that, it’s made my day thank you , you should publish it on your blog xx
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I just might, happy to see you liking it a lot, even making your day. wow. That is a compliment I’ll gladly take any day of the week.
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Thank you x
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The imagery really accentuates the feelings.
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Thank you xx
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paced perfectly and lyrically captivating.
The message is brilliant, that one simple thing that can pull you form only seeing the dark, realising that light can still appear.
Really great piece!
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I’m glad you got that message , I wasn’t sure it would come across, thank you x
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Oh it does indeed. You’ve a lovely way of getting your messages across. never doubt it’s not heard!
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Oh wow… I loved the message I this. This is so beautiful and clever! 😊
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Aww thank you I’m glad you could see the message, xx
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I did… Its something i need to remember 😊
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Doesn’t matter how dark it gets, you will always find beauty or learn more about yourself than before, x
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That’s true… You’re very wise. As well as sweet xx
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Phenomenal, every time
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Katrina,
Beauty can be found – yes
Beauty can be found In the chaos – yes
Beauty can be found In the chaos Of pain. – yes
Interesting perspective, as always.
Larry
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Thank you so much Larry x
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