He wants a love
with sunsets,
walks on the beach
As we hold hands
under the heat.
I want a love
In the shadows
Of the moonlight
As we drink rum,
Under the stars
Before we trespass
To forbidden lands.
K
He wants a love
with sunsets,
walks on the beach
As we hold hands
under the heat.
I want a love
In the shadows
Of the moonlight
As we drink rum,
Under the stars
Before we trespass
To forbidden lands.
K
How do both people achieve their wants?
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They don’t, they go their separate ways x
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Well if its real love they will always come back together.
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So very true x
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Give and take? π
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Oh yes x
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they both sound pretty good! π
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Oh thank you, which would you prefer?
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I would do both. I like rum π
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Haha likewise x
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Here I am thinking a pirates life for me again…. don’t let Lizzie get near the rum ππ
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Haha Rum is awesome x
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Ho ho ho… and a bottle of rum I was taught from a young age. 0912 in the morning here…. ready for a ho π
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Oh nice, x
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Nice… or nasty…. it’s always gonna be nice πππ₯πΎπ
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Speaking of which I am off to the supermarket… where the security guard has learned that I don’t appreciate being called Sir 72 times in a neighborhood where every citizen is being rehabilitated in some way or other. Even the pigs here are given a 5km no fly corridor by the rest of the bacon… Nothing reaks of fear like a corporate ass licking
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Again
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So eloquent, so few words say so much. Beautiful poem.
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Thank you x
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Opposites attract?
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That was the Paula Abdul song… damn good animation for its time on the film clip. Damn good for any time if revisited
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I really loved that song.
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Oh yes they attract, not sure if they work?
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Haha! Now, that can be true too.
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All things begin with the touch of hands … even getting at the rum
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Do not tell Lizzy!
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Haha so very true x
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Well written.
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Thank you x
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Reblogged this on lois e. linkens.
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Thank you xx
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no problem! x
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Oh very well done..
And yipee! Rum is back on the menu!
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You took it off?
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Not me! Katrina keeps going for tea!
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Haha
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I don’t mind good tea. Had chamomile this morning
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Well, there I prefer leaf green or jasmine.
Or, my good old Indian masala chai
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Home of tea you guys are. I worked in an Indian restaurant once. Good appreciators of tea. I will go and get some damiana this week. I usually keep a mix of leaf tea
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us and the Chinese
We use the word ‘chai’. The Chinese call it ‘cha’
The Turks call it ‘cai’ or something like that
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Ahh I need to try that,us English say chai aswell x
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Ah. You English got that from us Indians!
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Yeah we’re so unoriginal π
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Sometimes!
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Oh never tried ant of them, I’m boring and just like English tea lol x
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Ah come now.. You are anything but boring!
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Haha well thank you xx
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I apologise, xx
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Now how can I be angry when you say that? π
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Haha rum is always on the menu x
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Very good!
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They’re both very beautiful ways to live but it’s hard for them to mesh.
I don’t know which side I prefer, I guess it depends on my state of mind but something tells me for it to last I think the quiet serenity of the dark would be better. Besides it’s more fun to trespass π
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Haha yes I prefer the wild side, not sure how well they would work x
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Neither am I but it explains a lot about my past romantic liasons. Ahaha!!
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Haha Aww bless xx
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Different things;
Hard choices.
Keep it up! π
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Thank you lovely x
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I want them both! Each in its own moment! Lovely poem!
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Thank you xx
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Thank you x
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You’re always welcome π
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