I close my eyes & I begin to dream
Only to be woken by echoing screams,
A maze of paths & endless patterns
“Holy fuck” how did this happen?
I drift around there’s no way out
Barely can see, I panic & shout
Menacing roars from far ahead
It knows I’m here & it needs to be fed.
I run around it’s a lot to apprehend
Paths lead to nowhere except dead ends,
The pattern is complex, I’m not going to lie
I’m scared I’m lost & I don’t want to die.
Instincts surge and logic appears
I’ll find the centre, everything is clear
I’ll obtain a key to open this door
With the courage to slay a Minotaur.
Starting to wish I listened to my teacher
How did Theseus kill this creature?
No time to think, the roars get closer
I stumble & fall, “shit”
Into the Minotaurs enclosure.
I can feel it with me, I’m fully aware
It’s sizing me up, I feel its stare
Creeping out of the dark into my space
I nearly collapsed it has the same face.
Everything is clear the maze is my head
The fear I carry keeps this monster fed,
I’ve to face myself if I want to be free
I’m the only one that’s holding the key.
K
Superb!
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Thank you , I think this is my favorite piece out the lot x
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And such a lot! Goodnight Katrina.
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Night Eric x
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Holy cow that is amazing! Such stark imagery. Love the twist at the end. Wonderful piece!!
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Aww thank you so much xx
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Very welcome! 🙂
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Funny because Mars gone into Taurus today. MinoTAUR…. the bull… Minos and the Labyrinth. Bowie was a Capricorn though… same day in January as Elvis
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Oh what day would that be I’m Capricorn lol x
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A lot of Capricorn energy around me lately. 3 types of goat. The spiritual goat is the sea goat. Mars goes around the zodiac about every 2 years. Taurus and Capricorn both earrh signs. My Mars is in Taurus so I have a Mars return coming. Try http://www.astro.com
Hope all going well x
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Beautiful flow
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Thank you x
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My pleasure Katrina
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Those last lines! One of my favorite stories, great poem.
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Thank you so much x
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I am nominating you for a March madness award, just copy and paste this over 5 blogs if you like to participate. “I’m nominating you for That’s So Jacob’s March Blog Madness! It’s simple: find five interesting blogs today, copy and paste this comment, and give them a follow! http://www.thatssojacob.wordpress.com. Have fun spreading the blog love this month!”
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Aww thank you lovely xx
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your welcome
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Really gripping. The suspense jumps out of the jumbled passages to us! May those who feel this in their lives find a way out 🙂
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Aww thank you xx
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Beautiful! Such wisdom we find in our labyrinthine minds!
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Thank you xx
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Awesome stuff, milady!
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Thankyou x
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Wonderful fluid poetry – I would equate to tea and biscuits on a rainy afternoon overlooking hyde park
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Oh lovely view, thank you x
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when the minotaur hops on me back n’ goes fo’ me throat, lassie, i holler “Jesus have mercy!” and the damn thing disappears. anyway, that’s what worked fo’ me… you’ve written a little masterpiece here. bravo!!!
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Well thank you very nice words you say x
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