Open your eyes
To existence,
Shadows scatter
Into the distance.
Touched & tamed
By depression itself,
Masking reflection
In someone else.
Darkness comforts
As walls bleed,
In a garden of cold
Full of weeds.
Echoes whisper
What I can’t hear,
Yet colours wave
As messages appear.
Misfiring chemicals
Are black & white,
Yet colours are vivid,
In the dark of night.
Seeing more
Or hearing less,
It’s reality of dreams
Wrapped in madness.
K
Email me at Atzmere7@gmail.com if you can
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Revealing always and all of you, painting portraits of your self in words, taking your journey forward, he hopes. Do you find writing takes you forward towards
a fuller understanding of who you are? I should write more than I do! Perhaps
It should never be forced though?
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it’s never forced, it’s putting my head on paper, which sometimes I find out more about myself than I would like to x
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“Maybe consequences are dear friends in stealthy disguise.”
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Oh good thought x
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i like the lines, “Echos whisper/What I can’t hear,/Yet colors wave/As messages appear.” the combined imagery of hyperacusis and/or auditory and visual processing disorders – missing what is said twice, not seeing what is implied in vivid colors, is very powerful. i think you meant to write “hear” in that second line. nice poem.
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Haha yes slight spelling error there thank you, and I’m glad you liked it x
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you welcome
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Brilliant!
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Thank you x
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I like the garden of evil, milady. Rum is back!
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Haha so very true, Alot of rum aswell, ita a great inspiration rum x
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It is indeed!
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love your style of writing ❤
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Thank you please very x
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Sorry for that last comment auto correct changed it and sent it before I managed to correct it, anyway thank you lovely x
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Hi! Amazing words. So I just tagged you in one of my posts…
https://eccentricdevil.wordpress.com/2017/03/14/the-blue-sky-tag/
Do check it out. 😀
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Aww thank you I will do x
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Another piece of art
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Thank you xx
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My pleasure Katrina, always such a pleasure
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Wow.💓
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Thank you x
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