You’ve already broken
My heart in the future,
I’ve already felt its ache
And every rupture.
We fall in love
Everything is great,
You get to know me
I become your mistake.
You can’t control
What you don’t know,
You’ll always freak
When I’m feeling low.
You’ll hate my tears
As you forget the highs,
You won’t save me
When you feel me die.
I’ll try to apologise
And change myself,
I’ll tell you I love you
More than anyone else.
It’s already over
Before it’s begun,
You won’t accept me
You’ll choose to run.
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Love the succinct capturing of universal truth –
You get to know me
I become your mistake.
You can’t control
What you don’t know,
You’ll always freak
When I’m feeling low.
You’ll hate my tears
As you forget the highs
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Thank you, xx
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Truths
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That’s always the risk… but surely one day there will be one that won’t?
Happy Monday xo
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Hopefully there won’t be. But it’s always a risk, depends if it’s working taking x
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That’s the question – what makes it worth taking?
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Ahh so very true x
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It is… What makes it worth it for you? x
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Pretty powerful
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Thank you lovely xx
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Love is something worth doing but like magic there is a price you pay for it.
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So very true x
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Ouch! The desperation and hurt leaps off the screen. Well done. So sad that it is true for someone 😦 How I wish we could take people as they are and as we find them. All of us are more than our struggles and moments of being misunderstood. I wrestled with that in my “we are more” poems.
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Aww so true, people just want the perfect relationship, yet Alot are to ignorant to accept people who are different, I find broken people are best with other broken, there’s a sense of comfort x
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Utterly tragic. Extremely touching and an aching insight into your mindset.
The weird part is I agree when thinking of myself but disagree when I apply it to you. I want to argue that there are people out there who will never run, who will love every high and low and cherish the fact they’re allowed to be part of your life. Yet if I do argue this I’m a hypocrite because the same must be true for me but I can’t won’t or refuse to see it.
I guess in a way that’s the true tragedy of this piece. Yes its beautifully crafted in its expression of pain but is the scenario itself an invention. A guard against risks.
I could literally talk about this for hours but I’ll stop rambling.
Amazing piece, an evokative comment of romance!
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Aww that is weird. If someone else wrote this I’ll be telling them to take the risk and be happy, yet I’m a hypocrite because I wouldn’t do it myself. Haha no I completely get you, it’s good how you relate and thank you x
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My pleasure, it’s always nice to read something that evokes such a personal conflict and makes you analyse and ignore yourself.
Ever loving your work!
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Aww so sweet as always x
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💛🍍💛
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Thanks for the follow my new blogging friend. Keep on blogging and have a swell day.
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Beautiful piece ❤ Love it!
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Thank you x
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You are a really amazing mistake! 😉 Hey, dark fairy tale. “Would you like to be my most beautiful mistake?” that’s the voice of love. Maybe you are such a wonderful mistake that your Lover will never correct the mistake. Just a thought!
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Aww thank you that’s sweet x
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