Garden of evil

Walked into a storm
It started as a dream,
I had slid down a path
Into a lava stream.
Climbed up a hill
Which felt like death,
Nothing could be heard
Except fear in my breath.
I could only look down
At this deathly hollow,
The fear in my throat
Was difficult to swallow.
Fires burned bright
As souls changed form,
From life to death
In a blink of a storm.
This was no dream
But a nightmare,
There was no light or hope
Just pain and scare.
Winged monsters flew
There were no people,
I had woken in a garden
In the garden of evil.


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38 Responses to Garden of evil

  1. Simon says:

    Sounds like that start of a story.
    Hope you’re well lovely x

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  2. emotionsoflife2016 says:

    Marvelous Katrina

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Venusian Cenobite says:

    Hellish. Very good

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Reads like a painting by Hieronymus Bosch … lots of potential and well worth continuing .. though it will also stand as a stand alone.

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  5. simonfalk28 says:

    And you turned to a page, all white and bright. And wrote of your horror, to bring it into the light.
    And there it shone, for others to read. For horror can be lightened, when you share the screed.

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  6. Rajiv says:

    Ah, Milady, where there is evil, there is good

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  7. Creepy…and SO good! You know I like dark and twisty! 😘

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Coyote from Orion says:

    Hope you’re back in synch. Best wishes K. Xx

    Liked by 1 person

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