Glove on eagerly steady
on my knees,
I am ready
I bite my lip
and grab the shaft,
skim round the edge
With real craft.
I tease my way
down to the core.
a lot of effort
for this chore,
harder and deeper,
I break into a sweat
this much effort
I canโt forget.
Working hard like a machine
but I always feel better
when the toilet is clean.
K
Oh dear, a miss for me DF, somehow reads best the first time! ๐ Xx
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Hahah, thank you
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Toilet cleaning was never so sensually described! ๐
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Hahah thank you ๐
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I love these sort of ‘misdirection’ poems’. Great ending!
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Thank you. Misdirection would have been a better title lol
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That’s a good job done!! ๐
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Read twice? Never!
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๐ X
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Excellent, masterfully written!
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Thank you x
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I love this so much! The ending got me hahaha
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it x
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